Anyone a Pro in English Essay? (1 Viewer)

[gud_bam]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kcP4km4ZlNRogwbaht9oMLJnUSGK1eGc5T6LCpVKBDI/edit?usp=drivesdk​

 

[gud_bam]

I just curios with mine..

 

[Tickita]

- Nice intro, but I think the title should be on top -- or is that top paragraph not part of the essay?
- I can't stand writing conclusion paragraphs , but I recommend a summarized sentence for each of your points in the conclusion. Put in between "In a nutshell..." and "Would these strategies..."

I think otherwise it's fine. You got a thesis and a structure.

Just my opinion.

 

[gud_bam]

- Nice intro, but I think the title should be on top -- or is that top paragraph not part of the essay?

The top is question for refer

- I can't stand writing conclusion paragraphs

Why..? Is it too weird..?

but I recommend a summarized sentence for each of your points in the conclusion.

Summarize?

Tysm for ur comments.. but idk how to fix

 

[Tickita]

Why..? Is it too weird..?

No, not yours. I just don't like writing them

 

[gud_bam]

No, not yours. I just don't like writing them

Oh okie