Help Wanted & Needed (1 Viewer)

[Lovely_Cornchips]

So I write for fun as some of you may or may not know and I'm struggling with something.
I'm working on a fanfiction that is more action-packed than usual and as a result, am having some problems.
I need someone to read through what I have written so far and need feedback.

It would be MUCH appreciated.

 

[kuro]

I could probably help, I'm not very sure, maybe send me a part!

 

[Ringwanderung]

would recommend @Jimimis @kuroyuri but i’d love to also

 

[kuro]

would recommend @Jimimis @kuroyuri but i’d love to also

we're psychic omg lol

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

I could probably help, I'm not very sure, maybe send me a part!

Sure what I have written for this chapter isn't much so it shouldn't be too much to read in general

 

[kuro]

Sure what I have written for this chapter isn't much so it shouldn't be too much to read in general

alright!

 

[Ringwanderung]

we're psychic omg lol

think your pretty good, you’ve usually got some nice ideas

 

[kuro]

think your pretty good, you’ve usually got some nice ideas

wow thanks

 

[Jimimis]

I am HERE though idk how much help I could be I usually only do fluff

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

I am HERE though idk how much help I could be I usually only do fluff

uh...you may not want to uh...read what I wrote. I added a very disgusting gory scene just now <.<

 

[Ringwanderung]

uh...you may not want to uh...read what I wrote. I added a very disgusting gory scene just now <.<

not reading that

how bout @la_mort_pour_vous?

 

[Jimimis]

uh...you may not want to uh...read what I wrote. I added a very disgusting gory scene just now <.<

I don’t mind the gore I just wonder if I’d be able to contribute much

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

not reading that

how bout @la_mort_pour_vous?

He's reading the first chapters I can't show him this yet.

I don’t mind the gore I just wonder if I’d be able to contribute much

Ok then I'll send it in a minute.

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

I might be able to help c:

Are you ok with gore?

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

Yes, I lost my innocence a while ago TT (but seriously, yes)

Ok then I'll send you what I have written

 

[VillageIdiot]

If only there was a user dedicated to reading fanfics...

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

If only there was a user dedicated to reading fanfics...

Yeah