its cute :) the hairstyles are fun
1. Freckles drawn like that don’t look rlly natural. I don’t know if that’s the look you’re going for but if it is, then have them more randomized across the face
2. Try picturing their heads without the hair, just like bald. They have massive dents in their heads.
3. Keep the style consistent. For example, right girl has her entire eyes outlined, left girl doesnt. Right girl also has lips outlined (also, pretty much never do that) left girl doesnt
I would edit the pics to try and show you but my computers broken :( if you want, @ me on like Tuesday and I can try and show u what I mean visually