You're welcome! just leave the reader some time to breathe so to say and just take it all in! I'm so proud of you babe tho, I don't think I could write that well ~
I get it, I'd say when editing afterwards, just take some of the descriptions away and it's all good!
I get the feeling of wanting to SOMEHOW put into words what you feel and mean, but words just aren't enough
I like it! It's quite well written, altho if I would say there is one complaint, is that while you have written it very poetically, I'd say you have almost gone overboard with it.
If everything is very descriptive and said with fancy words, then it doesn't stand out if that makes sense. it...
I don't really develop crushes much
Often I come to a point where I feel like... if I wanted to, I could fall in love with them, but I wouldn't call it a crush.
For me.... I don't know why that hit me so hard ,but the pic we got of Lay with EXO when Ksoo enlisted
It just hit me differently how much I love them
tbh I think I'm not one for big moments or occasions, it's the little details that get me....
Yup yup... Kira and Marino are both only in this MV... :reallysadcat:
At least there is hope for Kira to get into the title senbatsu next single (Since it looks like they are doing it based on handshake sales and it looks like she'll make top 14 this time) but then she'll be separated from...
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