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This actually starts out in the main character's fiance's POV, but then it switches to hers - you'll see why.
Chapter 1: Goodbye and Good Riddance
Word count: 706
Dylan’s POV
“This is it, bro!” my older brother Drew said just before we headed to the church to marry my fiancée, Lizzie. “In a few hours, you’ll no longer be a bachelor!”
“I guess you can say goodbye to hitting up the girls at the bar, huh?” my friend Clayton added.
That was when it hit me. I was only nineteen, and I was about to be a married man. That meant I had to commit the rest of my life to one woman; was I really ready for that?
I sighed, sat down, and held my head in my hands. “You know what, Drew? I don’t know if I’m ready after all. I mean, I’m technically still a kid!”
“You’re not getting cold feet, are you, dude?” Clayton asked.
I stood up again. “It’s more than cold feet. I think we should skip the wedding and go road tripping.”
Drew formed an O with his lips. “Dylan, that’s betrayal!” he scolded. “Lizzie is going to be so pissed if she doesn’t see you at the altar!”
I glared at him. “Then so be it! I’m just not ready to get married yet!”
~~~~~
Lizzie’s POV
I waited patiently as my best friend Gabby, who was to be the maid of honor at my upcoming wedding, finished styling my hair. It was the morning of the wedding, and I was getting butterflies in my stomach just thinking about spending the rest of my life with my high school sweetheart, Dylan.
“Okay, all done!” Gabby announced momentarily, handing me a mirror. “What do you think, Mrs. Blackburn?”
I smiled as I looked in the mirror. My ash blonde hair was done up in a fancy French braid.
“I love it,” I said. “Thank you, Gabby!”
“You’re so welcome! Now, let’s do your makeup.”
After I was done getting all dolled up for the big day, I met my dad at the front door so he could bring me to the wedding.
“Well, don’t you look beautiful, sweetheart!” he complimented. “Did you finish writing those vows yet?”
“Yes, I did,” I affirmed. “I know exactly how to incorporate the news that I’m having twins, too.”
I’m twelve weeks pregnant with Dylan’s babies, and the pregnancy was part of the reason we decided to get married early.
Dad laughed. “I was wondering when you were going to tell him! That’s important information.”
***
In the church sanctuary, I discovered the altar was missing someone extremely vital: Dylan.
“Dad, where’s Dylan?” I whispered in Dad’s ear.
“Beats me,” he whispered back. “Maybe he got stuck in traffic or something.”
“Actually, he got cold feet,” the preacher said as he approached us. “I’m so sorry, Elizabeth – I believe you’ve just been jilted.”
My face turned beet red with anger. “What?!” I practically screamed. “I was looking forward to this day ever since he proposed, and he’s just now backing out?! I even had the news of our twins incorporated in my vows!”
“Well, honey… I guess God had other plans for you. You are only seventeen, after all. You’ve got plenty of time to find somebody new!”
I rolled my eyes. “Like I ever will! That’s it – I’m calling Dylan to break up!”
Holding up the skirt of my dress, I stopped back out, got in Dad’s car, and angrily dialed Dylan’s number. I got more and more pissed as each ring sounded until Dylan finally answered with, “Ah, shit! Lizzie?!”
“’Ah, shit’ is right, jackass!” I spat. “How DARE you ditch me on our wedding day!”
“Babe, I had to go into work!”
I didn’t believe him for one single second. In the background, I heard a combinations of road noise, a car radio, and enthusiastic chatter amongst Dylan’s brother and friends.
“I am NOT interested in lip service today. In fact, it’s over, and we’re not redoing the wedding!”
“But Lizzie—”
I stomped my foot in exasperation. “We’re DONE, Dylan Blackburn, and you’ll NEVER see MY CHILD – EVER!”
His friends could be heard laughing in the background.
“Ooh, you’re in trouble!” one of them teased.
“Damn fucking right he’s in trouble! No man jilts his PREGNANT fiancée and gets away with it! Goodbye, Dylan, and good riddance!”
Chapter 1: Goodbye and Good Riddance
Word count: 706
Dylan’s POV
“This is it, bro!” my older brother Drew said just before we headed to the church to marry my fiancée, Lizzie. “In a few hours, you’ll no longer be a bachelor!”
“I guess you can say goodbye to hitting up the girls at the bar, huh?” my friend Clayton added.
That was when it hit me. I was only nineteen, and I was about to be a married man. That meant I had to commit the rest of my life to one woman; was I really ready for that?
I sighed, sat down, and held my head in my hands. “You know what, Drew? I don’t know if I’m ready after all. I mean, I’m technically still a kid!”
“You’re not getting cold feet, are you, dude?” Clayton asked.
I stood up again. “It’s more than cold feet. I think we should skip the wedding and go road tripping.”
Drew formed an O with his lips. “Dylan, that’s betrayal!” he scolded. “Lizzie is going to be so pissed if she doesn’t see you at the altar!”
I glared at him. “Then so be it! I’m just not ready to get married yet!”
~~~~~
Lizzie’s POV
I waited patiently as my best friend Gabby, who was to be the maid of honor at my upcoming wedding, finished styling my hair. It was the morning of the wedding, and I was getting butterflies in my stomach just thinking about spending the rest of my life with my high school sweetheart, Dylan.
“Okay, all done!” Gabby announced momentarily, handing me a mirror. “What do you think, Mrs. Blackburn?”
I smiled as I looked in the mirror. My ash blonde hair was done up in a fancy French braid.
“I love it,” I said. “Thank you, Gabby!”
“You’re so welcome! Now, let’s do your makeup.”
After I was done getting all dolled up for the big day, I met my dad at the front door so he could bring me to the wedding.
“Well, don’t you look beautiful, sweetheart!” he complimented. “Did you finish writing those vows yet?”
“Yes, I did,” I affirmed. “I know exactly how to incorporate the news that I’m having twins, too.”
I’m twelve weeks pregnant with Dylan’s babies, and the pregnancy was part of the reason we decided to get married early.
Dad laughed. “I was wondering when you were going to tell him! That’s important information.”
***
In the church sanctuary, I discovered the altar was missing someone extremely vital: Dylan.
“Dad, where’s Dylan?” I whispered in Dad’s ear.
“Beats me,” he whispered back. “Maybe he got stuck in traffic or something.”
“Actually, he got cold feet,” the preacher said as he approached us. “I’m so sorry, Elizabeth – I believe you’ve just been jilted.”
My face turned beet red with anger. “What?!” I practically screamed. “I was looking forward to this day ever since he proposed, and he’s just now backing out?! I even had the news of our twins incorporated in my vows!”
“Well, honey… I guess God had other plans for you. You are only seventeen, after all. You’ve got plenty of time to find somebody new!”
I rolled my eyes. “Like I ever will! That’s it – I’m calling Dylan to break up!”
Holding up the skirt of my dress, I stopped back out, got in Dad’s car, and angrily dialed Dylan’s number. I got more and more pissed as each ring sounded until Dylan finally answered with, “Ah, shit! Lizzie?!”
“’Ah, shit’ is right, jackass!” I spat. “How DARE you ditch me on our wedding day!”
“Babe, I had to go into work!”
I didn’t believe him for one single second. In the background, I heard a combinations of road noise, a car radio, and enthusiastic chatter amongst Dylan’s brother and friends.
“I am NOT interested in lip service today. In fact, it’s over, and we’re not redoing the wedding!”
“But Lizzie—”
I stomped my foot in exasperation. “We’re DONE, Dylan Blackburn, and you’ll NEVER see MY CHILD – EVER!”
His friends could be heard laughing in the background.
“Ooh, you’re in trouble!” one of them teased.
“Damn fucking right he’s in trouble! No man jilts his PREGNANT fiancée and gets away with it! Goodbye, Dylan, and good riddance!”
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