a poem by me (1 Viewer)

[Wonpil]

i think i'm drowning

everything is down

i keep falling and falling down

i can't seem to come back from under

it's dark, everything is dark

pretty soon there will be nothing left

pretty soon i'll have nothing left

if i left everything would be better

everyone would be better

the world would be better

i'm drowning in my brain

 

[kodoku]

it's good to let things out and writing has always been an outlet for me too. You will not drown tho hun, you will survive all of this <3

 

[Wonpil]

it's good to let things out and writing has always been an outlet for me too. You will not drown tho hun, you will survive all of this <3

you think so?

 

[kodoku]

you think so?

yes, I believe that

 

[Wonpil]

yes, I believe that

thank you <3

 

[Saythename17]

I like the formation of the poem. As a person doing literature, I have not even tried to write one
I hope you can write the opposite or the positive side of this poem soon<3
EDEN FIGHTING!!!

 

[yeji]

so beautiful