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Success breeds complacency. Complacency breeds failure. Only the paranoid survive.



tear in a film

Words like under water in my ear
The curtain closes and I give my encore
Just for me, silent applause, did I lose?
Just for me, silent applause, did I lose?

Stand here and sway between two sides
My clock ticks slowly these days
A tear or a smile, I can't decide
Am I not enough or do I have to be enough for myself?
A step back or stay, or stay?

Am I a part of your image, do you see me standing here?
Does my color match the rest or do I have to go now?
Will I remain an extra in your film? Will you let me talk?
If the film ends here, I'll stay in the rain

Am I a part of your image, do you see me standing here?
Does my color match the rest or do I have to go now?
Will I remain an extra in your film? Will you let me talk?
If the film ends here, I'll stay in the rain
 
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tear in a film

Words like under water in my ear
The curtain closes and I give my encore
Just for me, silent applause, did I lose?
Just for me, silent applause, did I lose?

Stand here and sway between two sides
My clock ticks slowly these days
A tear or a smile, I can't decide
Am I not enough or do I have to be enough for myself?
A step back or stay, or stay?

Am I a part of your image, do you see me standing here?
Does my color match the rest or do I have to go now?
Will I remain an extra in your film? Will you let me talk?
If the film ends here, I'll stay in the rain

Am I a part of your image, do you see me standing here?
Does my color match the rest or do I have to go now?
Will I remain an extra in your film? Will you let me talk?
If the film ends here, I'll stay in the rain
I gave it a listen and I like it

what language is it in?
 
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Servus! Ich spreche nicht Deutsch. Auf Wiedersehen! Und Frohe Weihnachten!

Can you tell I studied German for like 11 years?
well, I can tell u that the grammar is right and u made no mistakes in what u wrote :dogsmile:




Odyssey

I pull the shards out of my fingers
I swore I wouldn't do that again
A whole harbor behind me in ruins
And I flee with every goddamn flood

When it hurts, I'm reminded of it
That I pay for every failed attempt
The remorse flickers in the remains of the mirror
Let me fall and just close my eyes

What no one sees simply never happened
Never come home from my odyssey

I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage
With weight on my hand
I've fallen so deep, deep, deep
Looking for support
I surface for oxygen
But my breath is gone
ebb and flow
Until blood leaks from my lungs
I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage

I sink into bed like I'm in the underworld
A thousand cracks in the ceiling and the water is falling
Through my empty hands, look around and ask what holds
Stop me from throwing myself in front of the dogs today

What no one sees simply never happened
Never come home from my odyssey

I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage
With weight on my hand
I've fallen so deep, deep, deep
Looking for support
I surface for oxygen
But my breath is gone
ebb and flow
Until blood leaks from my lungs
I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage

What no one sees simply never happened
Never come home from my odyssey

I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage
With weight on my hand
I've fallen so deep, deep, deep
Looking for support
I surface for oxygen
But my breath is gone
ebb and flow
Until blood leaks from my lungs
I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage
 
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well, I can tell u that the grammar is right and u made no mistakes in what u wrote :dogsmile:




Odyssey

I pull the shards out of my fingers
I swore I wouldn't do that again
A whole harbor behind me in ruins
And I flee with every goddamn flood

When it hurts, I'm reminded of it
That I pay for every failed attempt
The remorse flickers in the remains of the mirror
Let me fall and just close my eyes

What no one sees simply never happened
Never come home from my odyssey

I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage
With weight on my hand
I've fallen so deep, deep, deep
Looking for support
I surface for oxygen
But my breath is gone
ebb and flow
Until blood leaks from my lungs
I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage

I sink into bed like I'm in the underworld
A thousand cracks in the ceiling and the water is falling
Through my empty hands, look around and ask what holds
Stop me from throwing myself in front of the dogs today

What no one sees simply never happened
Never come home from my odyssey

I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage
With weight on my hand
I've fallen so deep, deep, deep
Looking for support
I surface for oxygen
But my breath is gone
ebb and flow
Until blood leaks from my lungs
I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage

What no one sees simply never happened
Never come home from my odyssey

I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage
With weight on my hand
I've fallen so deep, deep, deep
Looking for support
I surface for oxygen
But my breath is gone
ebb and flow
Until blood leaks from my lungs
I'm going on a deep, deep, deep sea voyage
Oh, I like the song and the music video, too. It’s good.

P.S. One of my biggest regrets in life is to completely forget how to speak German.
 
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Paracetamol

I feel dizzy, when I don't see you anymore
The throbbing in my head, everything hurts
I'm shaking, can you see it? Almost like withdrawal
Medicine, so bitter

It's the middle of the night
Call you if it's okay
Just want to hear from you for a moment
Sorry it's so late

You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in
You're like paracetamol to me
You're good for me, believe me, I'm not lying
My doctor prescribes me something
If you're not there, nothing else will help
You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in

Pain feel less when you lie with me
Finally see clearly, I don't think you know at all
How good you are, almost too good for me
Give me another whiff

It's the middle of the night
Wake yourself up if it's okay
Just want to feel you for a moment
Sorry it's so late

You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in
You're like paracetamol to me
You're good for me, believe me, I'm not lying
My doctor prescribes me something
If you're not there, nothing else will help
You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in

And I know, I know, I know
Gotta get along without you, oh-oh
Only with you will it be so easy, so easy, so easy
I want you to know

You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in
You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in
 
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Paracetamol

I feel dizzy, when I don't see you anymore
The throbbing in my head, everything hurts
I'm shaking, can you see it? Almost like withdrawal
Medicine, so bitter

It's the middle of the night
Call you if it's okay
Just want to hear from you for a moment
Sorry it's so late

You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in
You're like paracetamol to me
You're good for me, believe me, I'm not lying
My doctor prescribes me something
If you're not there, nothing else will help
You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in

Pain feel less when you lie with me
Finally see clearly, I don't think you know at all
How good you are, almost too good for me
Give me another whiff

It's the middle of the night
Wake yourself up if it's okay
Just want to feel you for a moment
Sorry it's so late

You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in
You're like paracetamol to me
You're good for me, believe me, I'm not lying
My doctor prescribes me something
If you're not there, nothing else will help
You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in

And I know, I know, I know
Gotta get along without you, oh-oh
Only with you will it be so easy, so easy, so easy
I want you to know

You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in
You're like paracetamol to me
Everything's okay with me, when I take you in
Me likey and the lyrics are so so so beautiful :cri:
And his voice is sexy ooh lala mr sir man :pepedaddy::pepedaddy::pepedaddy:
 
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