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This is a rewrite of this story, and I'm really confident it'll be a lot better. lol
Chapter 1
Jessica finished doing her makeup just as the doorbell rang. She was getting ready for a date to reconcile with her ex-boyfriend Garrett. Soon after their fifteen-month-old daughter Chloe turned six months old, Garrett had gotten an out-of-state job offer. Jessica hadn’t been the least bit keen on leaving Mississippi, her home state, so they’d decided to split. But now that Garrett was back in town, having been laid off recently, the two of them were finally getting back together.
The doorbell rang again as Jessica was coming down the stairs, and when she opened it, Chloe’s babysitter Skye was standing there.
“Skye, come in!” Jessica greeted, letting Skye enter the house. “I’ll get Chloe for you.”
“Okay!” Skye said, sitting on the couch with her purse.
Having overheard her mother’s conversation with the sitter, Chloe put down the book she was “reading”, or rather looking at the pictures in it, pulled herself up, and made her way towards the living room. When she saw Skye, she ran up to her and tried to climb up onto the couch.
“Hi, Chloe!” Skye said to her charge, pulling her up. “How have you been?”
“She’s been good,” Jessica answered on Chloe’s behalf. “Chloe, are you going to be extra-good for Miss Skye while I’m gone?”
“Yes!” Chloe said, her honey blonde curls bobbing up and down as she nodded.
“By the way, congratulations on you and Garrett getting back together,” Skye said to Jessica. “He seems like a great guy.”
“Thank you,” Jessica said with a smile. “So, you know the routine – dinner at six, bed at 7:30 – and I shouldn’t be gone past midnight.”
“I sure do!” Skye agreed just as the doorbell rang again. Jessica got up to answer it and revealed a dapper-looking Garrett.
“Dada!” Chloe squealed, running up to Garrett for a hug.
Garrett picked his daughter up and spun her around before greeting her with, “I haven’t seen you in forever, darlin’! I’ve missed you like crazy.”
After receiving a kiss on the cheek, Chloe was set back down, and Garrett turned to his girlfriend. “Are you ready to go, babe?” he asked.
“Totally ready,” Jessica answered, taking Garrett’s arm. “Bye, kids!”
“Bye, have fun!” Skye called after them as they left.
***
“So, where are we going?” Jessica asked once she and Garrett were on the main road.
“There’s a new nightclub I think we should check out,” Garrett said, keeping his eyes on the road. “It’s supposed to be really cool.”
Jessica was getting excited now, because before Chloe, she and Garrett had enjoyed going to nightclubs together. “Oh, okay! Where is it, and what’s it called?”
Garrett stayed silent, and Jessica repeated her question.
“Just shut up, okay?!” Garrett suddenly snapped. “You’ll know when we get there.”
Jessica rolled her eyes, remembering Garrett’s pet peeve of hearing the same question twice. “Garrett, I asked you a simple question – there’s really no need to get so pissy.”
All of a sudden, Garrett screeched to a halt by the side of the road and sneered at his girlfriend and future kidnapping victim.
“I TOLD you to SHUT THE FUCK UP, bitch!” he barked, making Jessica wince. “Get out of the car!”
Jessica started to shake with fear. “What?! I will NOT!”
Garrett proceeded to undo Jessica’s seatbelt, pick her up, and carry her around to the backseat. Then, he tossed her in like a sack of potatoes, slammed the door shut, jumped back into the driver’s seat, and took off to a destination as yet unknown to a now unconscious Jessica.
Chapter 1
Jessica finished doing her makeup just as the doorbell rang. She was getting ready for a date to reconcile with her ex-boyfriend Garrett. Soon after their fifteen-month-old daughter Chloe turned six months old, Garrett had gotten an out-of-state job offer. Jessica hadn’t been the least bit keen on leaving Mississippi, her home state, so they’d decided to split. But now that Garrett was back in town, having been laid off recently, the two of them were finally getting back together.
The doorbell rang again as Jessica was coming down the stairs, and when she opened it, Chloe’s babysitter Skye was standing there.
“Skye, come in!” Jessica greeted, letting Skye enter the house. “I’ll get Chloe for you.”
“Okay!” Skye said, sitting on the couch with her purse.
Having overheard her mother’s conversation with the sitter, Chloe put down the book she was “reading”, or rather looking at the pictures in it, pulled herself up, and made her way towards the living room. When she saw Skye, she ran up to her and tried to climb up onto the couch.
“Hi, Chloe!” Skye said to her charge, pulling her up. “How have you been?”
“She’s been good,” Jessica answered on Chloe’s behalf. “Chloe, are you going to be extra-good for Miss Skye while I’m gone?”
“Yes!” Chloe said, her honey blonde curls bobbing up and down as she nodded.
“By the way, congratulations on you and Garrett getting back together,” Skye said to Jessica. “He seems like a great guy.”
“Thank you,” Jessica said with a smile. “So, you know the routine – dinner at six, bed at 7:30 – and I shouldn’t be gone past midnight.”
“I sure do!” Skye agreed just as the doorbell rang again. Jessica got up to answer it and revealed a dapper-looking Garrett.
“Dada!” Chloe squealed, running up to Garrett for a hug.
Garrett picked his daughter up and spun her around before greeting her with, “I haven’t seen you in forever, darlin’! I’ve missed you like crazy.”
After receiving a kiss on the cheek, Chloe was set back down, and Garrett turned to his girlfriend. “Are you ready to go, babe?” he asked.
“Totally ready,” Jessica answered, taking Garrett’s arm. “Bye, kids!”
“Bye, have fun!” Skye called after them as they left.
***
“So, where are we going?” Jessica asked once she and Garrett were on the main road.
“There’s a new nightclub I think we should check out,” Garrett said, keeping his eyes on the road. “It’s supposed to be really cool.”
Jessica was getting excited now, because before Chloe, she and Garrett had enjoyed going to nightclubs together. “Oh, okay! Where is it, and what’s it called?”
Garrett stayed silent, and Jessica repeated her question.
“Just shut up, okay?!” Garrett suddenly snapped. “You’ll know when we get there.”
Jessica rolled her eyes, remembering Garrett’s pet peeve of hearing the same question twice. “Garrett, I asked you a simple question – there’s really no need to get so pissy.”
All of a sudden, Garrett screeched to a halt by the side of the road and sneered at his girlfriend and future kidnapping victim.
“I TOLD you to SHUT THE FUCK UP, bitch!” he barked, making Jessica wince. “Get out of the car!”
Jessica started to shake with fear. “What?! I will NOT!”
Garrett proceeded to undo Jessica’s seatbelt, pick her up, and carry her around to the backseat. Then, he tossed her in like a sack of potatoes, slammed the door shut, jumped back into the driver’s seat, and took off to a destination as yet unknown to a now unconscious Jessica.