What do you think of my English project? (1 Viewer)

[DaisySkies]

It's supposed to be a utopia brochure. I based mine off of Poppy Playtime. It's from before the hour of joy and before it shut down, but the last page is after everything happened and catnap scratched it out and left his messages.
Also, this thing destroyed my hands 😭
I've already turned it in, but now my entire family is getting on to me for not coloring it... I hate having to color in tiny details bc I'm never satisfied with it after. But at least i turned in something i was satisfied with and am very proud of

 

[ChiaraStar169]

wow! I hope you get an A on it!

 

[DaisySkies]

wow! I hope you get an A on it!

I hope so ;-;

 

[Harmony_Starz]

I think you need to focus a little on ur handwriting

 

[DaisySkies]

I think you need to focus a little on ur handwriting

i know 😭 i always start out writing neatly, but as i go on it gets worse and worse. I also suck at writing in straight lines on lined paper anyways lol
but i was mainly asking what you thought of how i presented it ;-;

 

[Harmony_Starz]

i know 😭 i always start out writing neatly, but as i go on it gets worse and worse. I also suck at writing in straight lines on lined paper anyways lol
but i was mainly asking what you thought of how i presented it ;-;

Writing in a stright line is a nightmare for me too, I was so bad at it as a kid, my lines would curve down so much

I was busy at that time so I thought to read it later

 

[DaisySkies]

Writing in a stright line is a nightmare for me too, I was so bad at it as a kid, my lines would curve down so much

I was busy at that time so I thought to read it later

lol, i don't understand how some kids are able to do it without a ruler
oki dokie ^^

 

[MK3AM]

lovely hope u get a 100 or A+

 

[DaisySkies]

lovely hope u get a 100 or A+

I hope so!