Book You'll Never Walk Alone | a Jimin fic I wrote in 2017 (1 Viewer)

[ChiaraStar169]

@MrDetective inspired me to go on the hunt for my very first K-pop fanfic, and wdyk I found it! This was from 2017, so like seven years ago. lol I never did finish it or even get past the first few chapters... but believe me when I say that those chapters are hella short, way shorter than what I write now. Well, here goes nothing!

Chapter 1

Rachel’s POV

I ran around the house like a cyclone as I got ready for school. I’d slaved over a pencil and paper all weekend working on my math homework, and now I couldn’t find it! I paused for a moment to check the time and realized I only had ten minutes to get to the bus. I usually take my car, but it’s being serviced right now.

“Rachel! It’s 6:15; hurry up!” I heard my dad yell. “You’re going to be late for the third time this month! I don’t want to have to drag you home from detention again!”

I rolled my eyes. “I know, Daddy! I can’t find my math homework! Lily didn’t get ahold of it, did she?”

Lily is my ten-month-old daughter, who I’d conceived on my very first date. My dad has since banned me from dating until I’m eighteen.

Mom suddenly appeared with my math homework and slammed it into my hands. “Found it. Have a good day, sweetie, and good luck on your biology test!”

We have a test in biology class on insects. The teacher, Ms. Hendricks, makes her tests fairly easy, but they can also be challenging.

“Thanks, Mom! Bye!”

I rushed to the bus stop and slowed to a halt when I saw a new guy standing at the corner. He looked to be Asian, with a black bowl cut and almond-shaped eyes. He was very cute.

“Hi, I’m Rachel—Rachel Neal, to be specific,” I greeted him. “Are you new?”

“Mm-hmm,” he mumbled, followed by something I couldn’t quite hear.

“I’m sorry, what did you say?”

“Oh, just my name—Park Ji-Min,” he said in a Korean accent. “I come from South Korea.”

I could tell Ji-Min was very shy, understandably so. If I were to move to a whole other country on the other side of the world, I’d be shy, too.

“Aw, don’t be shy! I just want to be friendly. What part of South Korea are you from?”

“Busan; it’s a city on the southeast coast, directly across the pond from Japan.”

The bus came, and when we got on, I introduced him to the bus driver.

“It’s wonderful to meet you, darlin’!” the driver said to Ji-Min. “You can sit in any of the empty seats.”

We both picked the same seat in the second row and continued our conversation.

“What brings you to Chatsworth?” I asked.

“My dad moved me and my brother here after he…unmarried my mom,” Ji-Min said.

“Oh, I’m sorry to hear that! We call it a divorce, by the way.”

Ji-Min shrugged. “It’s alright. It was the moving part I didn’t like.” Suddenly, he got distracted and started staring at me. “You have a beautiful accent, and lovely eyes.”

“Thank you, I’m flattered!” I said. “I like your accent, too.” Out of the corner of my eye, I saw that the bus was already pulling up to the high school to let us off. Ji-Min seemed to notice as well, because he said:

“Is that our school? It’s kind of big.”

“Yep!” I said. “Let me see your schedule.”

Ji-Min reached into his backpack, pulled out a folded piece of paper, and showed it to me. I looked at it and noticed we were to share second period science, fourth period math, fifth period health, and seventh period art. I pointed it out to Ji-Min.

“Cool! I think I like talking to you; you’re very friendly.”

I gave him an appreciative smile. “Let’s go to the principal’s office to get your locker arrangements!” I suggested.

“Okay.”

@Bara_Gisladottir thoughts? should I post more, or spare your eyes? lol

 

[IGURO]

it's pretty good for a first, but spare @Bara_Gisladottir 's eyes

 

[ChiaraStar169]

it's pretty good for a first, but spare @Bara_Gisladottir 's eyes

I'm not really proud of the way I chose the character's name and location (straight from a public records site), bc I got a message on Wattpad sayingthat she knew an actual girl named Rachel Neal who actually lived in Chatsworth, Georgia. I was like so if you're ever stuck on a name and setting, do NOT do what I did! #LearnFromMyFail

 

[IGURO]

I'm not really proud of the way I chose the character's name and location (straight from a public records site), bc I got a message on Wattpad sayingthat she knew an actual girl named Rachel Neal who actually lived in Chatsworth, Georgia. I was like so if you're ever stuck on a name and setting, do NOT do what I did! #LearnFromMyFail

got cha! Just 'Y/n L/n' your way out of things

 

[dark_tranquility]

@MrDetective inspired me to go on the hunt for my very first K-pop fanfic, and wdyk I found it! This was from 2017, so like seven years ago. lol I never did finish it or even get past the first few chapters... but believe me when I say that those chapters are hella short, way shorter than what I write now. Well, here goes nothing!

Chapter 1

Rachel’s POV

I ran around the house like a cyclone as I got ready for school. I’d slaved over a pencil and paper all weekend working on my math homework, and now I couldn’t find it! I paused for a moment to check the time and realized I only had ten minutes to get to the bus. I usually take my car, but it’s being serviced right now.

“Rachel! It’s 6:15; hurry up!” I heard my dad yell. “You’re going to be late for the third time this month! I don’t want to have to drag you home from detention again!”

I rolled my eyes. “I know, Daddy! I can’t find my math homework! Lily didn’t get ahold of it, did she?”

Lily is my ten-month-old daughter, who I’d conceived on my very first date. My dad has since banned me from dating until I’m eighteen.

Mom suddenly appeared with my math homework and slammed it into my hands. “Found it. Have a good day, sweetie, and good luck on your biology test!”

We have a test in biology class on insects. The teacher, Ms. Hendricks, makes her tests fairly easy, but they can also be challenging.

“Thanks, Mom! Bye!”

I rushed to the bus stop and slowed to a halt when I saw a new guy standing at the corner. He looked to be Asian, with a black bowl cut and almond-shaped eyes. He was very cute.

“Hi, I’m Rachel—Rachel Neal, to be specific,” I greeted him. “Are you new?”

“Mm-hmm,” he mumbled, followed by something I couldn’t quite hear.

“I’m sorry, what did you say?”

“Oh, just my name—Park Ji-Min,” he said in a Korean accent. “I come from South Korea.”

I could tell Ji-Min was very shy, understandably so. If I were to move to a whole other country on the other side of the world, I’d be shy, too.

“Aw, don’t be shy! I just want to be friendly. What part of South Korea are you from?”

“Busan; it’s a city on the southeast coast, directly across the pond from Japan.”

The bus came, and when we got on, I introduced him to the bus driver.

“It’s wonderful to meet you, darlin’!” the driver said to Ji-Min. “You can sit in any of the empty seats.”

We both picked the same seat in the second row and continued our conversation.

“What brings you to Chatsworth?” I asked.

“My dad moved me and my brother here after he…unmarried my mom,” Ji-Min said.

“Oh, I’m sorry to hear that! We call it a divorce, by the way.”

Ji-Min shrugged. “It’s alright. It was the moving part I didn’t like.” Suddenly, he got distracted and started staring at me. “You have a beautiful accent, and lovely eyes.”

“Thank you, I’m flattered!” I said. “I like your accent, too.” Out of the corner of my eye, I saw that the bus was already pulling up to the high school to let us off. Ji-Min seemed to notice as well, because he said:

“Is that our school? It’s kind of big.”

“Yep!” I said. “Let me see your schedule.”

Ji-Min reached into his backpack, pulled out a folded piece of paper, and showed it to me. I looked at it and noticed we were to share second period science, fourth period math, fifth period health, and seventh period art. I pointed it out to Ji-Min.

“Cool! I think I like talking to you; you’re very friendly.”

I gave him an appreciative smile. “Let’s go to the principal’s office to get your locker arrangements!” I suggested.

“Okay.”

@Bara_Gisladottir thoughts? should I post more, or spare your eyes? lol

keep going : )

 

[IGURO]

keep going : )

I agree with this statement

 

[ChiaraStar169]

keep going : )

I agree with this statement

okay, then! lol

 

[ChiaraStar169]

@MrDetective @Bara_Gisladottir

Chapter 2

Ji-Min’s POV

After an introduction to the principal, Mrs. Ritter, she led me to my new locker, where I put my backpack away and got out the books I needed for English. When I finally found the right classroom, and it took me about ten minutes, I knocked softly on the closed door. The male teacher stopped what he was doing and let me in.

“Oh, hi!” he said warmly. “You must be our new student from South Korea! You go by Park, right?”

“Um…it-it’s…actually, my surname is Park,” I said nervously. “Koreans put the surname first. My given name is Ji-Min.”

“Ha!” one kid guffawed from the back. “So if I went to South Korea, would I become Welch Matt?” he asked.

I blushed with embarrassment, and the teacher intervened. “Mr. Welch, that was uncalled for! Make one more outburst like that, and you get an F for the day.” Then, he turned to me and said, “Sorry about that, Mr. Park; Matt Welch can be nasty at times. I’m Mr. Mullins; you may sit in the empty seat in the front.”

I muttered a “thank you” and sat down for the lesson.

~~~~~

Rachel’s POV

“Uh-oh…what’s with the grin?” my friend Katie teased as I walked into my history class.

“Oh, she must’ve met a guy!” our other friend Lauren added. “Did you, Rach?”

“No!” I lied. “I mean, I did meet someone, but it’s not like I have a crush on him!”

“Ooh, what’s his name?!” Katie asked.

I giggled. “Ji-Min Park…”

“Aha! You giggle whenever you say his name! You DO have a crush! He sounds Korean, too.”

“Okay, okay! I do have a crush on him. We met at the bus stop, and when we were on the bus, he stared at me and complimented on my eyes and accent. Then, just before we walked in, he said he likes talking to me.”

“Do you think that means he has a crush on you, too?” Lauren asked.

I laughed. “We’ll see.”

***

After class, I was almost to biology when I caught a glimpse of Ji-Min wandering around, looking lost. I waved him over, and he smiled as he approached me.

“Hey, Rachel,” he said, pronouncing my name “Lei-chell”. “Do you know where Ms. Hendricks’ class is?”

I laughed. “We share the same second period, remember?” I reminded him. “You could’ve waited for me.”

Ji-Min shrugged. “I forgot.”

He followed me down the hall and into biology, where I introduced him to Ms. Hendricks.

“Well, welcome to Chatsworth, Ji-Min! I’m Ms. Hendricks,” Ms. Hendricks said, shaking Ji-Min’s hand. “So, we actually have a test today, but you don’t have to take it if you don’t want to.”

“Nah, no thanks,” Ji-Min said.

“Okay. You can do anything you want, but don’t disrupt the class.”

“Alright.”

 

[IGURO]

@MrDetective @Bara_Gisladottir

Chapter 2

Ji-Min’s POV

After an introduction to the principal, Mrs. Ritter, she led me to my new locker, where I put my backpack away and got out the books I needed for English. When I finally found the right classroom, and it took me about ten minutes, I knocked softly on the closed door. The male teacher stopped what he was doing and let me in.

“Oh, hi!” he said warmly. “You must be our new student from South Korea! You go by Park, right?”

“Um…it-it’s…actually, my surname is Park,” I said nervously. “Koreans put the surname first. My given name is Ji-Min.”

“Ha!” one kid guffawed from the back. “So if I went to South Korea, would I become Welch Matt?” he asked.

I blushed with embarrassment, and the teacher intervened. “Mr. Welch, that was uncalled for! Make one more outburst like that, and you get an F for the day.” Then, he turned to me and said, “Sorry about that, Mr. Park; Matt Welch can be nasty at times. I’m Mr. Mullins; you may sit in the empty seat in the front.”

I muttered a “thank you” and sat down for the lesson.

~~~~~

Rachel’s POV

“Uh-oh…what’s with the grin?” my friend Katie teased as I walked into my history class.

“Oh, she must’ve met a guy!” our other friend Lauren added. “Did you, Rach?”

“No!” I lied. “I mean, I did meet someone, but it’s not like I have a crush on him!”

“Ooh, what’s his name?!” Katie asked.

I giggled. “Ji-Min Park…”

“Aha! You giggle whenever you say his name! You DO have a crush! He sounds Korean, too.”

“Okay, okay! I do have a crush on him. We met at the bus stop, and when we were on the bus, he stared at me and complimented on my eyes and accent. Then, just before we walked in, he said he likes talking to me.”

“Do you think that means he has a crush on you, too?” Lauren asked.

I laughed. “We’ll see.”

***

After class, I was almost to biology when I caught a glimpse of Ji-Min wandering around, looking lost. I waved him over, and he smiled as he approached me.

“Hey, Rachel,” he said, pronouncing my name “Lei-chell”. “Do you know where Ms. Hendricks’ class is?”

I laughed. “We share the same second period, remember?” I reminded him. “You could’ve waited for me.”

Ji-Min shrugged. “I forgot.”

He followed me down the hall and into biology, where I introduced him to Ms. Hendricks.

“Well, welcome to Chatsworth, Ji-Min! I’m Ms. Hendricks,” Ms. Hendricks said, shaking Ji-Min’s hand. “So, we actually have a test today, but you don’t have to take it if you don’t want to.”

“Nah, no thanks,” Ji-Min said.

“Okay. You can do anything you want, but don’t disrupt the class.”

“Alright.”

this is good ngl
but we honestly need more Jimin POVs. i feel like whenever i was writing bts fanfics back in the day, i would never do male POVs and that made me so mad. but this is pretty damn good so far!

Please post the next chapter soon!!!

 

[ChiaraStar169]

this is good ngl
but we honestly need more Jimin POVs. i feel like whenever i was writing bts fanfics back in the day, i would never do male POVs and that made me so mad. but this is pretty damn good so far!

Please post the next chapter soon!!!

thx! and looking back, I may have gotten the KR pronunciation of Rachel wrong lol but oh well... he pronounced it uniquely, that's for sure!

 

[ChiaraStar169]

At lunch, Ji-Min and I met with Katie, Lauren, and Lauren’s boyfriend Aaron as we sat down together with our food.

“What’s your name, dude?” Aaron asked Ji-Min.

“This is Ji-Min Park; he just moved in from South Korea,” I introduced.

“Oh, yeah! You were in my English class. Remember when you asked the guy behind you for an eraser? That was me—Aaron.”

“How do you like Mr. Mullins?” I asked.

“He’s nice,” Ji-Min said, “but one kid made fun of me for our custom of putting the surname before the given name.”

“Oh, you must be talking about Matt Welch,” I said. “He mocks all the foreign newbies.”

“You know, Rach is single, if you’re interested,” Katie pointed out.

“Katie!” I scolded. “I’m NOT going out with him; my dad won’t let me date until I’m eighteen, remember?!”

Ji-Min’s face could’ve lit up a whole room with his grin. Katie gasped at this.

“Ooh, somebody’s got a crush!” she teased.

“What do you mean?” Ji-Min asked.

“A crush is when someone is attracted to someone else. Some of the signs are blushing, clumsiness, and the jitters. You, my friend, seem to have all three!”

“It’s my first day; of course I’m nervous!”

“Let’s do the name test,” Lauren said. “If you blush when we say a girl’s name, you have a crush on her. Rachel.”

Ji-Min blushed.

“Do you?” I asked, looking hopefully at Ji-Min.

Ji-Min suppressed a laugh and nodded his head yes. Aaron whispered something in his ear, and he said, “Can I have your number?”

“Sure!”

I gave Ji-Min my phone number, and he typed it into his phone.

***

After school, I was studying history after giving my yellow Lab, Penny, her afternoon walk when my cell phone rang. Expecting it to be Ji-Min, I answered right away.

“Hi, is this Rachel?” Ji-Min asked nervously.

“Sure is! What’s up?”

“Would you…” Ji-Min paused to gather his thoughts. “Would you like to go out? On-on…a date, I mean? I was thinking, um…Saturday?”

“Of course! What did you have in mind? We could go out for dinner, watch a movie…”

“Yeah, dinner sounds good. Where’s a good place to eat?”

“There’s a Mexican place that just opened. Have you ever had Mexican?”

“No, I haven’t.”

“Oh, you’re missing out! Meet me at my house at five, and I’ll take you there.” Then, I thought about the movie portion of the date. “So, for the movie, we could watch ‘Sweet Home Alabama’; have you ever heard of that movie?”

Ji-Min was silent, prompting me to continue.

“It stars an amazing actress named Reese Witherspoon, and it’s about how she meets this guy, but when she goes back home to divorce her husband, she falls back in love with him.”

“Sounds interesting! It’s a date, then.”

“Who were you talking to?” I heard Daddy ask as I hung up.

“There’s a new kid at school from South Korea named Ji-Min Park,” I explained. “He was asking me out on a date.”

Daddy paused. “A date,” he repeated.

“Yes, Daddy, a date,” I said. “You’re going to have to get used to me hanging out with guys; I’m not a little girl anymore!”

“Do you remember what dates lead to?”

I groaned. “That was over a year ago! Come on, please???”

Daddy sighed. “He’d better have you home by twelve.”

 

[ChiaraStar169]

@MrDetective @Bara_Gisladottir

 

[IGURO]

At lunch, Ji-Min and I met with Katie, Lauren, and Lauren’s boyfriend Aaron as we sat down together with our food.

“What’s your name, dude?” Aaron asked Ji-Min.

“This is Ji-Min Park; he just moved in from South Korea,” I introduced.

“Oh, yeah! You were in my English class. Remember when you asked the guy behind you for an eraser? That was me—Aaron.”

“How do you like Mr. Mullins?” I asked.

“He’s nice,” Ji-Min said, “but one kid made fun of me for our custom of putting the surname before the given name.”

“Oh, you must be talking about Matt Welch,” I said. “He mocks all the foreign newbies.”

“You know, Rach is single, if you’re interested,” Katie pointed out.

“Katie!” I scolded. “I’m NOT going out with him; my dad won’t let me date until I’m eighteen, remember?!”

Ji-Min’s face could’ve lit up a whole room with his grin. Katie gasped at this.

“Ooh, somebody’s got a crush!” she teased.

“What do you mean?” Ji-Min asked.

“A crush is when someone is attracted to someone else. Some of the signs are blushing, clumsiness, and the jitters. You, my friend, seem to have all three!”

“It’s my first day; of course I’m nervous!”

“Let’s do the name test,” Lauren said. “If you blush when we say a girl’s name, you have a crush on her. Rachel.”

Ji-Min blushed.

“Do you?” I asked, looking hopefully at Ji-Min.

Ji-Min suppressed a laugh and nodded his head yes. Aaron whispered something in his ear, and he said, “Can I have your number?”

“Sure!”

I gave Ji-Min my phone number, and he typed it into his phone.

***

After school, I was studying history after giving my yellow Lab, Penny, her afternoon walk when my cell phone rang. Expecting it to be Ji-Min, I answered right away.

“Hi, is this Rachel?” Ji-Min asked nervously.

“Sure is! What’s up?”

“Would you…” Ji-Min paused to gather his thoughts. “Would you like to go out? On-on…a date, I mean? I was thinking, um…Saturday?”

“Of course! What did you have in mind? We could go out for dinner, watch a movie…”

“Yeah, dinner sounds good. Where’s a good place to eat?”

“There’s a Mexican place that just opened. Have you ever had Mexican?”

“No, I haven’t.”

“Oh, you’re missing out! Meet me at my house at five, and I’ll take you there.” Then, I thought about the movie portion of the date. “So, for the movie, we could watch ‘Sweet Home Alabama’; have you ever heard of that movie?”

Ji-Min was silent, prompting me to continue.

“It stars an amazing actress named Reese Witherspoon, and it’s about how she meets this guy, but when she goes back home to divorce her husband, she falls back in love with him.”

“Sounds interesting! It’s a date, then.”

“Who were you talking to?” I heard Daddy ask as I hung up.

“There’s a new kid at school from South Korea named Ji-Min Park,” I explained. “He was asking me out on a date.”

Daddy paused. “A date,” he repeated.

“Yes, Daddy, a date,” I said. “You’re going to have to get used to me hanging out with guys; I’m not a little girl anymore!”

“Do you remember what dates lead to?”

I groaned. “That was over a year ago! Come on, please???”

Daddy sighed. “He’d better have you home by twelve.”

this story is getting intense more pls

 

[dark_tranquility]

I sense drama excellent

 

[ChiaraStar169]

@Bara_Gisladottir @MrDetective

Chapter 4

The next morning, I was walking Seok-Jin to Mr. Mullins’ class when we were accosted by the three girls that made up a clique called “The Triple Threat”. Their names are Arielle Hodges, Yvette Wilkerson, and Miranda Fisher, and they’ve been my mortal enemies since middle school.

“I see you found a new guy I can steal,” Yvette taunted. “What’s your name, sexy?”

“Yvette, don’t,” I said sternly. “This is Seok-Jin Kim, and I already have dibs on him. Now, go away!”

“Ooh, la-la! A Korean boy; I likey!” Yvette purred, getting into Seok-Jin’s personal space. “Where’s your first class? I’ll take you there!”

Seok-Jin smiled. “Okay, sure. I like that.”

“Seok-Jin! You weren’t supposed to say yes; she’s already dating someone!”

“Now, who said she wanted to have him?” Arielle asked. “She just wants to show him around.”

“Yeah, beat it!” Miranda added snidely, pushing me to the ground. By the time I got back up, they were walking away with Seok-Jin on Yvette’s arm. Holding back tears, I ran to my history class. When I sat down, Katie noticed my distraught expression and asked what was up.

“Yvette Wilkerson; that’s what’s up!” I snapped. “She stole Seok-Jin from me when I was trying to take him to class!”

Katie gasped. “The audacity! How did this happen?”

I explained the whole encounter, and Lauren gave me a sympathetic frown.

“Aw, I was so looking forward to your journey with him! Y’all seem like you could be the perfect couple.”

“I know,” I said sadly.

“Hey, don’t be sad!” Katie consoled. “He’ll find out she has a boyfriend soon enough.”

I glared at her. “Yvette is dating Chris Poindexter.”

“Yeah, so?”

I slapped my forehead. “Is he not the quarterback of the football team?! Seok-Jin will be a goner when Chris finds out!”

***

As soon as I walked out after class, I saw Seok-Jin handing Yvette her phone back.

“See you Friday night?” Seok-Jin asked her.

“See you later today, more like,” Yvette said. “We’re sitting together at lunch, remember?”

I gasped. “Katie, hold my purse!” I shouted, getting ready to charge like a bull towards them.

“Lizzie, no!” Lauren urged, pulling me back. “Fighting is against school rules!”

“Why don’t you just ask him where they’re going on this date? Then, the three of us will think of a plan at lunch to bring him back to you.”

I sighed. “You’re right, let’s do that.”

 

[IGURO]

@Bara_Gisladottir @MrDetective

Chapter 4

The next morning, I was walking Seok-Jin to Mr. Mullins’ class when we were accosted by the three girls that made up a clique called “The Triple Threat”. Their names are Arielle Hodges, Yvette Wilkerson, and Miranda Fisher, and they’ve been my mortal enemies since middle school.

“I see you found a new guy I can steal,” Yvette taunted. “What’s your name, sexy?”

“Yvette, don’t,” I said sternly. “This is Seok-Jin Kim, and I already have dibs on him. Now, go away!”

“Ooh, la-la! A Korean boy; I likey!” Yvette purred, getting into Seok-Jin’s personal space. “Where’s your first class? I’ll take you there!”

Seok-Jin smiled. “Okay, sure. I like that.”

“Seok-Jin! You weren’t supposed to say yes; she’s already dating someone!”

“Now, who said she wanted to have him?” Arielle asked. “She just wants to show him around.”

“Yeah, beat it!” Miranda added snidely, pushing me to the ground. By the time I got back up, they were walking away with Seok-Jin on Yvette’s arm. Holding back tears, I ran to my history class. When I sat down, Katie noticed my distraught expression and asked what was up.

“Yvette Wilkerson; that’s what’s up!” I snapped. “She stole Seok-Jin from me when I was trying to take him to class!”

Katie gasped. “The audacity! How did this happen?”

I explained the whole encounter, and Lauren gave me a sympathetic frown.

“Aw, I was so looking forward to your journey with him! Y’all seem like you could be the perfect couple.”

“I know,” I said sadly.

“Hey, don’t be sad!” Katie consoled. “He’ll find out she has a boyfriend soon enough.”

I glared at her. “Yvette is dating Chris Poindexter.”

“Yeah, so?”

I slapped my forehead. “Is he not the quarterback of the football team?! Seok-Jin will be a goner when Chris finds out!”

***

As soon as I walked out after class, I saw Seok-Jin handing Yvette her phone back.

“See you Friday night?” Seok-Jin asked her.

“See you later today, more like,” Yvette said. “We’re sitting together at lunch, remember?”

I gasped. “Katie, hold my purse!” I shouted, getting ready to charge like a bull towards them.

“Lizzie, no!” Lauren urged, pulling me back. “Fighting is against school rules!”

“Why don’t you just ask him where they’re going on this date? Then, the three of us will think of a plan at lunch to bring him back to you.”

I sighed. “You’re right, let’s do that.”

is this rachel pov? i'm a little confused

 

[ChiaraStar169]

is this rachel pov? i'm a little confused

oh, sorry I forgot to mention the changes I made. more in the next reply

 

[ChiaraStar169]

@MrDetective @Bara_Gisladottir okay, so I decided for the male lead, I'm going to make it Jin instead of Jimin jbc he's a bit older, which wouldn't make the female lead so young as a mother (Jimin is a '95 while Jin is a '92, this is set in 2009, and so they'd be seventeen instead of fifteen), and then the female lead I changed to a girl named Lizzie Saylor. The other girls (Katie and Lauren) remain the same.

 

[IGURO]

@MrDetective @Bara_Gisladottir okay, so I decided for the male lead, I'm going to make it Jin instead of Jimin jbc he's a bit older, which wouldn't make the female lead so young as a mother (Jimin is a '95 while Jin is a '92, this is set in 2009, and so they'd be seventeen instead of fifteen), and then the female lead I changed to a girl named Lizzie Saylor. The other girls (Katie and Lauren) remain the same.

okay cuz that was confusing makes a bit more sense

 

[dark_tranquility]

always nice to read a fan fic

that drama with the triple threat <3