Anger (fuck this 10 characters thing) (1 Viewer)

[Lovely_Cornchips]

It builds.
I'm fine one second
Gone the next.

Calm demeanor shriveled
and shed upon the floor.
His presence soothes
then burns.
His overbearing scent
oppresses, crushes, and destroys.
His gaze leaves me breathless.
It hurts.
Stabs.
Makes me bleed deep within.

Cuts you can't see.
Bruises you can't press.
Aches and burns that heal
unstably as I mend them myself.

No equipment.
No sutures.
No proper tools to keep me whole.

I'm drowning in my own thoughts.
I'm suffocating as he stares.
Dying before a crowded room.
Nobody knows.
Nobody sees.
Nobody listens.

Breath quickens.
Fingers tighten.

They can either mold
or
destroy.

They release and I crumble.

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

I think @Angelyna_Frost is the one who likes my writing.

 

[Mayday]

Your writing is really nice. It comes from pure emotion, which is obvious. Nice!

 

[lexus]

I stan a writing queen.

 

[Jungkook]

You're really good at the imagery thing

 

[yeji]

wow that really is good

 

[kodoku]

very nice 🥰

 

[jasque]

Let's kill this love

 

[Angelyna_Frost]

I think @Angelyna_Frost is the one who likes my writing.

Chipsy, you know that I am positive you could make a living as a professional writer if you wanted to. You have both technical skill and raw emotion that comes through in your work. That is extremely rare, and imo, it's what separates you from most people who can't combine the two worlds.

Nice to get a shout out from you- I hope you're doing okay. ❤