18+ Death + Violence Poem (1 Viewer)

[dark_tranquility]

I wander the roads
looking for a victim
looking for a victim
to entice then slice
gutting them like a fish
a well made dish
A whistling noise is made
then they are no longer alive
then they are no longer alive
a rancid corpse in my room
it faced a deathly demise
The violence calms my mind
a bloody death silences the voices
witnessing their choices
I try to crack it like a vault
but it is mostly my fault
I wish them deceased
I wish them deceased
but it's hard and overwhelming
but it's hard and overwhelming
a man made delusion
where my dreams come true
in a transparent blue

@kimsguardian
@Jungwonie
@Vikki

 

[StirFriedPanda]

Not a huge fan of violent poems but this is a really good poem. It makes this sith lord kinda nervous...

 

[dark_tranquility]

Not a huge fan of violent poems but this is a really good poem. It makes this sith lord kinda nervous...

My headspace needed unhinging lol and thanks

 

[StirFriedPanda]

My headspace needed unhinging lol and thanks

I'm glad I could help a friend.

 

[dark_tranquility]

I'm glad I could help a friend.

yes yes!

 

[Jungwonie]

I'm a minor
but you tagged me so I read it, don't blame me >.>
it's great actually

 

[dark_tranquility]

I'm a minor
but you tagged me so I read it, don't blame me >.>
it's great actually

Thanks yo!

 

[kimsguardian]

this is so dark

 

[noctis]

I love it

 

[uran]

Very raw and agressive

 

[dark_tranquility]

Very raw and agressive

Like a certain someone :p