Fanart I need HAAAAALP (2 Viewers)

[VillageIdiot]

This is for the Jessica Artist Thread. I need feedback on this one before I start the other ones
I know I need to neaten up the text organization but is it hard to read? Do I need to change the font? The size or color? Too wordy?
Any ideas on how to incorporate a Golden star theme are also welcome

 

[gongchan]

The text closer to the bottom is a little bit hard to read for me at least because it is kind of small. Though I would get a second opinion because mine might me skewed because I need new glasses lol.

 

[potato]

It's really good! But I would change the font or the size of the writing at the bottom because it is hard to read.

 

[Tir]

Yeah the text near the bottom is a bit hard to read for me too

 

[Jimimis]

Oh heavens yes I think I went blind no cursive PLEASE

 

[bulletproof]

Oh my God I forgot about this XD I feel terrible, I promised that I’ll help It looks very pretty, but I’d change the font. Handwritten fonts are usually good for titles, but a bit hard to read for paragraphs XD I like the black and white efect on the sides. Good job

 

[VillageIdiot]

Oh my Got I forgot about this XD I feel terrible, I promised that I’ll help It looks very pretty, but I’d change the font. Handwritten fonts are usually good for titles, but a bit hard to read for paragraphs XD I like the black and white efect on the sides. Good job

Ngl I forgot about it too

 

[bulletproof]

Ngl I forgot about it too

Oof but I’m feeling terrible for postponing it

 

[VillageIdiot]

Oof but I’m feeling terrible for postponing it

Don't worry about it
Probably would have wound up not being used since I'm going more in depth for this

The old concept wouldn't have fit any way

 

[NogaNono]

Pretty much the same opinion as everyone else. It looks great but it’s still a bit hard to read.

 

[spicy_illusion]

For me...









The same opinion as everyone else! 😁

 

[Mayday]

Yeah, I'd change the font, and maybe add some inner shadowing in the text to make it clearer to read. A different color, too.