Is this a good start to my book? (TW, Suicide, Self Harm) (1 Viewer)

[doll]

This is just the info i have to get it started
i have more, like contents of the chapters and a page where it goes into depth of some personal things but yk

i have this much detail because there is perspective chapters and allat

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

I'd say so-I do the same thing when I"m writing as well. Just so I don't accidentally change the tone of a character without meaning to-I just look at the things I wrote about each character and get into their headspace.

 

[doll]

Spoiler: VERY BIG TW

This is like, the very end of the story.
Very sad, very sad ending.

 

[doll]

I'd say so-I do the same thing when I"m writing as well. Just so I don't accidentally change the tone of a character without meaning to-I just look at the things I wrote about each character and get into their headspace.

yessss
ive written short stories before but ive never taken on a project like thissss

 

[Lovely_Cornchips]

yessss
ive written short stories before but ive never taken on a project like thissss

Crap I didn't realize you were going to post more so I accidentally chopped it up without meaning to-my bad. But yeah I'd say you're doing good for this being your first big story. I've only ever managed to finish ONE of mine.