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[hxney_jun]

Sorry. It’s not that I’m sad I just like adding a dark twist to my writing. It’s where my creative mind goes lol xp maybe next time, I’ll write more fluffier stuffs lol

I KNOW BUT IM SAD AND ITS MAKING ME SADDERRRRR

 

[Yelena_Belova]

Try me!

 

[Myth]

Try me!

Slick roads

The roads were dyed in neon
Glossy from the evening rain

It looked cool to touch
If I were to glide my hand over it
And would feel the cold droplets on the skin
Of my finger tips

It would feel sudden
My nerves would light up surprise
But it would be new
Exciting

I let the cityscape whirl past me into a blur of shapes

and looked forward
Letting the road take me to
My next stop

 

[Yelena_Belova]

Slick roads

The roads were dyed in neon
Glossy from the evening rain

It looked cool to touch
If I were to glide my hand over it
And would feel the cold droplets on the skin
Of my finger tips

It would feel sudden
My nerves would light up surprise
But it would be new
Exciting

I let the cityscape whirl past me into a blur of shapes

and looked forward
Letting the road take me to
My next stop

It’s beautiful! It paints a very pretty picture.

 

[Violanah]

Anchovies

the ancient anchovies sit on my shelf

I don’t quite fancy them
Don’t know why they are there
where they come from even

they are just there

perhaps they were gifted to me by an old relative
Perhaps i bought them thinking
I could use them for a special casserole recipe
Perhaps an old lover liked them and kept them on the shelf for a special occasion
I’m not sure but

they were always there

They lay in waiting. Collecting dust.

They lay in waiting. Their moment may come.

They may not.

They will sit comfortably waiting for an old friend to return.

Very beautiful!

 

[StirFriedPanda]

Roses are red
Violet is Blue
Say something Mean
and she'll eat you.

 

[dummi]

bibi loves spicy food the most

 

[Sanumi]

 

[Myth]

Roses are red
Violet is Blue
Say something Mean
and she'll eat you.

I sat in the diner

I asked for my order minutes ago

yes yes waffles

When I asked for them, the waitress said in a graveling voice it would be a moment and refilled my drink

I remember watching it pour out
The ice sliding gracefully down the watery path
The splish and splooshing of the glass being
Filled

I thanked her quietely and she nodded curtly exiting

Leaving me alone again
I wrestled with my many thoughts for a moment
Closed my eyes and felt the slight breeze from the ceiling fans above

Reopening, I was welcomed back
The warm yellow lights bathed me and my surroundings

It’s just me here in the corner.

Grabbing my glass, I took a sip and continued my wait at a quiet pace.

 

[StirFriedPanda]

I took a sip and continued my wait at a quiet pace.

I love that line! I like it when people don't follow poetry rules. You always get really interesting word play and sentence structure.

 

[Myth]

bibi loves spicy food the most

Inky black hair spread everywhere
Many directions and paths on the sheets

if you’d studied them careful
You could get lost
Many journeys from one strand to the next
Each path intertwining and exiting at their own leisure

the chest rose and went down subtly
Quiet breaths

Closed eyes… lids resting gently, closing vision off to the world and allowing a world to be seen within

If you could enter there
You could sink deep into a new world
An unknown variable to you but

It is familiar to someone

 

[Myth]

The message came to him today.

He was sitting out
Thinking
But not really… there wasn’t much to think about.

Still, the sun beat down on him and wrapped him up in its warm embrace

And he let it and did nothing

Just let it be, let it happen.

The path below him stretched before him and he let it become what he knew

Despite not taking it. No he just took the image in and let it be.

The message came and interrupted the one image.

He slowly blinked and got up

Stretching and breaking free of the wrapped enclosure he was in.

And turned around and exited

 

[ichigohon]

Cheese dripped on me

it slowly slid off my hands
And onto my knees

I felt it pooling through the fabric
It soaked it and turned it into an ugly color

I wanted to clean it up but
My hands were greesey

so I just watched it with fascination
And looked away and continued

letting the cheese claim me

 

[dark_tranquility]

Ah a poem.

This is nice. I also write such wording.

 

[The_LastRomeo]

 

[velvet]

 

[uran]

 

[Myth]

why am I getting so many replies?


anyways cracks knuckles

 

[Myth]

Ah a poem.

This is nice. I also write such wording.

I wanna steal your breath

I want to reach in

Reach through your throat

And grasp it
Forcefully pulling out
Dragging it out

It would be sudden but
You would feel it

You would worry for a bit but
I would make sure
That will forget

That you would never notice
Feeling it in my hands, I'd let it tangle in my fingers
Let it dangle off the tips and flow gently in the wind

Flow on

 

[Myth]

I spread the frosting
Slowly dug the knife in the bowl
and watched the frosting drizzle

Down on to the table
It plopped down
And spread out, slowly
Silky, shiny

Slimey

The knife pushed the surface and
The frosting spread over
The once dark surface
Being dyed a white color

I felt my tastebuds tingling
I wanted to reach and grab it
Without even thinking...
I could do it

But I kept on and
Continued frosting
Letting myself get lost in
The motions.