what should happen next in my story? (POLL) (1 Viewer)

[Jungwonie]

How do you see it happening

I actually am not very sure but I'm curious about this mysterious girl

 

[Willow]

I actually am not very sure but I'm curious about this mysterious girl

hahaha as you should be

 

[Jungwonie]

hahaha as you should be

Will you share your story once it is finished?

 

[Willow]

Will you share your story once it is finished?

do you understand French?

 

[Jungwonie]

do you understand French?

Nooo
@roses_are_rosie Uncle, will you translate it for me?

 

[Willow]

Nooo
@roses_are_rosie Uncle, will you translate it for me?

I wished I could write my story in English but I cannot

 

[Jungwonie]

I wished I could write my story in English but I cannot

That is fine, no need to worry :)

 

[Willow]

That is fine, no need to worry :)

it is a cute story overall but kinda weird as well

 

[Jungwonie]

it is a cute story overall but kinda weird as well

I actually love that kind of story

 

[Willow]

I actually love that kind of story

I made a summary here in KPS if you wanna read

 

[Jungwonie]

I made a summary here in KPS if you wanna read

Link?

 

[Willow]

Link?

Spoiler: summary

My story is set in an other planet which is called Yuki (the habitants are called yukians) and the city's name is Coloread. We follow a 14-year-old student that is called Candice Jones. Candice is half Irish-British and from Sweetland, Kingdom of the candies. She arrived in Coloread nine years before our story is happening. The story begins at the moment she was going to a new school and when she found her class she saw Sakino, her first love and her past feelings came suddenly back. She thought that she was lovely in her uniform. Unfortunately she remembered that Sakino loves Yuko, one of their classmates. Yuko and Candice were good friends but this rivalry created jealousy and tension in their friendship. She is particularly narcissistic and for her Yuko is not a rival at her level. She describes Yuko as a flat-chest girl and said that she didn't look like an attractive girl at all. Candice is afraid to not be able to seduce Sakino, because it would ruin her reputation. She is seen as a tease and she likes flirting with any girl that appeal her physically. Despite her sincere feelings, she knows that maybe it won't be that easy to conquer Sakino's heart. However, when she suspected Sakino and her best friend, Rinko to be more than friends she decided to trust Yuko and together to conduct an investigation, in order to find out the truth.

 

[Jungwonie]

Spoiler: summary

My story is set in an other planet which is called Yuki (the habitants are called yukians) and the city's name is Coloread. We follow a 14-year-old student that is called Candice Jones. Candice is half Irish-British and from Sweetland, Kingdom of the candies. She arrived in Coloread nine years before our story is happening. The story begins at the moment she was going to a new school and when she found her class she saw Sakino, her first love and her past feelings came suddenly back. She thought that she was lovely in her uniform. Unfortunately she remembered that Sakino loves Yuko, one of their classmates. Yuko and Candice were good friends but this rivalry created jealousy and tension in their friendship. She is particularly narcissistic and for her Yuko is not a rival at her level. She describes Yuko as a flat-chest girl and said that she didn't look like an attractive girl at all. Candice is afraid to not be able to seduce Sakino, because it would ruin her reputation. She is seen as a tease and she likes flirting with any girl that appeal her physically. Despite her sincere feelings, she knows that maybe it won't be that easy to conquer Sakino's heart. However, when she suspected Sakino and her best friend, Rinko to be more than friends she decided to trust Yuko and together to conduct an investigation, in order to find out the truth.

Oooh so that's what it's about!
It sounds good already!

 

[Willow]

Oooh so that's what it's about!
It sounds good already!

that is basically the first 10ish chapters :)) after that the storyline is a little different

 

[Jungwonie]

that is basically the first 10ish chapters :)) after that the storyline is a little different

I'm looking forward to it!!

 

[Sooyaabean]

it does thx :=)

Good luck writing!!

 

[roses_are_rosie]

Nooo
@roses_are_rosie Uncle, will you translate it for me?

I'll let you read the story, that's the best way to learn French

 

[athenaaa]

Voted for option one

 

[Willow]

I'll let you read the story, that's the best way to learn French

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU CAN READ YOURSELF IF YOU WANT TO

 

[roses_are_rosie]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA YOU CAN READ YOURSELF IF YOU WANT TO

For sure