Heavy Lies the Crown (Endless Affliction) (1 Viewer)

[dark_tranquility]

To spot a thief in the night.
I have a bright and dark way of thinking
Chasing ghosts in my nightmares
The most vibrant of desires
To aim higher is the plan
But the crown is heavy
My levy knows no limitations
Fragmentation of my medicine
That makes me ill of will
And fight my thoughts on rewind
I try to be kind
But these voices make my view of society painted and forever tainted
I cannot breath
Or receive much of a notion
So I hereby take potions
To become one with the ocean
My suicide set in motion
My suicide is redemption
Did I fail to mention
The cleansing of the soul
Comes from old
And the soil to harness toil
In hindsight my world is bright
When I don't have to fight the dark
Which sets me apart

@vogue @Bookworm
@Lady_Grey @Saythename17 @Chahee
@Jakey_Yoda @kodoku @DrowningFishy @Somi

Haven't written a poem in a while.
Only thing I felt really good at still
After all these years.

Thanks for having me.

 

[kodoku]

sorrowful and lovely..

 

[dark_tranquility]

sorrowful and lovely..

I sort out how to survive a funeral by make them suffer as inspiration.

An Australian symphonic deathcore band.

That and my current mood and ill thoughts.

Thanks, your compliment makes my world that much brighter.

 

[DrowningFishy]

 

[dark_tranquility]

I can be the cutie on the left while you are on the right. Hehe thanks. This made my night/day.

 

[Sourcekeeper]

To spot a thief in the night.
I have a bright and dark way of thinking
Chasing ghosts in my nightmares
The most vibrant of desires
To aim higher is the plan
But the crown is heavy
My levy knows no limitations
Fragmentation of my medicine
That makes me ill of will
And fight my thoughts on rewind
I try to be kind
But these voices make my view of society painted and forever tainted
I cannot breath
Or receive much of a notion
So I hereby take potions
To become one with the ocean
My suicide set in motion
My suicide is redemption
Did I fail to mention
The cleansing of the soul
Comes from old
And the soil to harness toil
In hindsight my world is bright
When I don't have to fight the dark
Which sets me apart

@vogue @Bookworm
@Lady_Grey @Saythename17 @Chahee
@Jakey_Yoda @kodoku @DrowningFishy @Somi

Haven't written a poem in a while.
Only thing I felt really good at still
After all these years.

Thanks for having me.

Not a subject i was really into in school to understand the underlying meaning, so i cant really interpret the deep meaning of what you wrote but i have to say from my couple of attempts to decipher it, you are a amazing individual to be able to convey such intricate feelings into words which i can never master unless i study more on this. I hope one day you will find the beautiful light and happiness will take the pains of yesterday away.

 

[dark_tranquility]

Not a subject i was really into in school to understand the underlying meaning, so i cant really interpret the deep meaning of what you wrote but i have to say from my couple of attempts to decipher it, you are a amazing individual to be able to convey such intricate feelings into words which i can never master unless i study more on this. I hope one day you will find the beautiful light and happiness will take the pains of yesterday away.

I won't as long as I am deeply influenced by what's in my head.

It's hard to see each day out when all you, want is for your mind to be silent.

 

[yeji]

wow this is amazing

 

[Saythename17]

Such a nice poem!
I'm sure that you can write the positive side of this poem soon! <3

 

[dark_tranquility]

Such a nice poem!
I'm sure that you can write the positive side of this poem soon! <3

I write better dark poems than vibrant ones. But yeah could do. Just need the mindset to write to.
also thanks @vogue Glad you like.

 

[dark_tranquility]

Really powerful <3

*throws things around* Like me too <3 Even with a tiny stature <3
Thanks hehe