She wants what we all want Poem (2 Viewers)

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

she can see the light
she can see the light
her funds are tight
and her face a fright
and her face a fright
nightmares gather
brewing up a storm
getting sawn in half
her body laid in a bath
it smelled of rot
it smelled of rot
not of this world
but another dimension
she copes somehow
she deals with it differently
all hail the female form
all hail the female form

@kimsguardian
@sunflower
@Tsukino
@Yachii

 

[XZCZVSHZKAODJLWS]

ooh, interesting. i feel it.

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

ooh, interesting. i feel it.

Usually my poems have no subject and just dark themes.
I decided something different.

 

[XZCZVSHZKAODJLWS]

Usually my poems have no subject and just dark themes.
I decided something different.

its really nice ! thank you for sharing x

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

its really nice ! thank you for sharing x

Thanks and anytime!

 

[Selfmate]

I don't get it personally but nice

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

I don't get it personally but nice

It's my fault for including a female I guess?

 

[Selfmate]

It's my fault for including a female I guess?

sorta
the last part about the female form confused me

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

sorta
the last part about the female form confused me

I think the last part was about aliens???

 

[Selfmate]

I think the last part was about aliens???

huh well that one went over my head lol

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

huh well that one went over my head lol

that it did.

 

[Willow]

It could be a nice song haha

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

It could be a nice song haha

what genre?

 

[Willow]

what genre?

Synth pop

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

Synth pop

I probably would have said that or metalcore

 

[Willow]

I probably would have said that or metalcore

Metalcore yes

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

Metalcore yes

the sounds of Bullet for My Valentine or similar.

 

[Willow]

the sounds of Bullet for My Valentine or similar.

Definitely

 

[MK3AM]

i love your poems deary~

 

[HelloGoodbyeDie]

i love your poems deary~

Thanking you friend!